Pages

Thursday 31 March 2016

The cloud maker

7 comments:

  1. Hi my name's Tahurangi I really like your story and your adjective. How do you do your story so good?

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi teArangaMai my name is mia from papakaio school im a year 7. I love your your story because it is so detailed and interesting i love how you decscribed in every sentence

    ReplyDelete
  3. sorry didnt mean to do 2 " your s"

    ReplyDelete
  4. sorry didnt mean to do 2 " your s"

    ReplyDelete
  5. Hi teArangaMai my name is mia from papakaio school im a year 7. I love your your story because it is so detailed and interesting i love how you decscribed in every sentence

    ReplyDelete
  6. HI teArangaMai my name is Zahra from Whakamaru school. Nice story about the cloud maker. I really like how describe the grandfather and the little boy.

    ReplyDelete
  7. This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete