Kia ora TeArangaMai, Ko Shilaine toku ingoa I like how you have used animals as your family awesome.You have used metaphors that are descriptive.Great keep up your terrific work. From Shilaine.
Hi Aranga Mai, my name is Aylah from Waima School, I really like the way you have included the different animals in your Metaphor Poem, and how you have said that you are the cages that keep your family together.
Kia ora Te Aranga Mai! Shontayne and I were reading your blog and we came across your poetry. And we really love how you have written this poem. You are very good at it. Well done! We will come back to read some more of your work. Arohanui, Shontayne & Nana Wiki
Hello my name is Mia friom papakaio school i am a year 7. I like how you used lots of describing words.
ReplyDeleteHi Aranga. I like how you described that your family is caring and supports eachother for everything.
ReplyDeleteHi Aranga I like how you care for your family and hold the love between your family. I like how you described your family with love and care.
ReplyDeleteKia ora TeArangaMai,
ReplyDeleteKo Shilaine toku ingoa I like how you have used animals as your family awesome.You have used metaphors that are descriptive.Great keep up your terrific work.
From Shilaine.
Hi Aranga Mai, my name is Aylah from Waima School, I really like the way you have included the different animals in your Metaphor Poem, and how you have said that you are the cages that keep your family together.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Te Aranga Mai!
ReplyDeleteShontayne and I were reading your blog and we came across your poetry. And we really love how you have written this poem. You are very good at it. Well done!
We will come back to read some more of your work.
Arohanui,
Shontayne & Nana Wiki